Insurgent Chapter 5.3
Valerie Murphy frowned at herself in the mirror. The makeup couldn’t disguise her pallor, nor could new clothes disguise her nearly gaunt figure. She leaned close, squinting her eyes, and noticed something which had escaped…
Month: January 2011
Serialized novels? Looking for feedback
The good news is, since the beginning of January I’ve gone from being 1/3 complete on Insurgent to 2/3rd complete… nearly 30,000 words written in the last 5 days. It’s exciting to be moving along…
Insurgent Chapter 5.2
Jim Turville was bored. Three days since they’d arrived in Whitesville, and already he was as bored as he could be. As the quick reaction force, Sergeant Nguyen’s squad pretty much had nothing to do,…
Insurgent Chapter 5.1
When the phone rang, Rebecca sat up instantly, dropping the paperback she’d been reading to the floor. The phone rang? The house phone hadn’t rung since January: lines had been down across the state, and…
Insurgent Chapter 4.4
As the line of humvees pulled into the town, Turville thought that Whitesville looked considerably better when they weren’t being shot at. That wasn’t likely at this point. First squad had already split off from…